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Slenderman kept his easy pace through the forest, he scanned every inch of the woods. Night was his favorite time to be out, no human child could see him from a distance. The night clouds covered the full moon, stars were scattered across the sky.

Summer nights meant camping, camping meant children. Sadly, he wasn't seeing any signs of nearby activity, all he heard was crickets, owls, the harsh wind, and... crying?

Slenderman bolted to the sound where the sobbing was coming from, from a close enough distance, he saw some one with messy, long raven hair and a hoody. What stood out was the blood that soaked the hoody in every bit. Now Slenderman was cautious.

Though it wasn't like the kid could hurt him in anyway, but he had encountered his kind before. How he'd hate to get his suit bloody. He backed away slowly so the child wouldn't look up from his sobbing. But he did, and saw the tall slender figure that stood in the shadows of the forest.

He fell silent.

Though he had no eyes, Slenderman could see exactly what kind of thing this human was. Pure white face, and carved in mouth, it was carved into an unnerving smile. The burned bottom lip was a bloody shade of red. But that more frightening detail was his eyes. The lids were burned leaving blackness to surround his eyes, their stare was piercing. This was no child. It was a monster.

"Hi... I'm Jeff..." the boy spoke up. His tone was surprisingly casual. Wasn't crying. He had been laughing.

Jeff wasn't afraid of Slenderman, nor was Slenderman afraid of Jeff. He just had his limits, such as not wanting blood all over his suit and this stranger clearly did not mind getting soaked in blood.

Slenderman didn't really ever interact with strangers other than children, (which this one was clearly aged) naturally he would flee to shadows, but he could sense something within the young man. A connection.

"Good evening... If I may ask, why are you covered in blood?" Slenderman asked, politely.

"...My family couldn't sleep..." Jeff responded, a hint of satisfaction in his voice.

Slenderman could inference what events took place in the house this evening. But he could not be the least bit fazed by his actions.

"Why?"

Suddenly, the Slenderman sensed fury, rage and blood lust coming from the human before him.

"Mommy and Daddy lied..." he growled, his hand that wielded the bloody steak knife trembling.

Before he could respond, Slenderman felt a cold, blue feeling from Jeff.

"...Liu was tired..." he sadly responded, seemingly out of no where from his previously angry tone.

"What happened to your face?" Asked the Slenderman, changing the subject before Jeff could say more.

"What happened to yours?" he retorted bitterly.

"...Do you have any shelter, Jeff? You seem to be running away from home. Where exactly are you going if you don't mind my asking?"

No response.

"...Jeff?"

"Mi vida es tormento."

Slenderman pitied the poor creature. He can't go home but he certainly can't stay here! He was just a young teen, who would shelter him in his appearance? Who could accept him for what he has become? But then again, it's not like Jeff wanted company. They're all liars. All of them.

The tall dark and face-less has always been without friends, family, company... Who needs that from humans?

"No where... I can't go home now..." Said Jeff as he moved his gazed to the forest floor. The grass moving slowly with the wind. He let out a short throat laugh.

"There is a dark realm of strange creatures such as myself. All of us are different in our own special way... Outcast and monsters beyond imagination roam free amongst each other... This is a realm I am free to call home."

The killer did not respond, only listened to what the Slenderman was saying with interest. A whole realm of things like him?

No humans... No Bullies... No lairs.

"Come with me, you must no longer remain in the territory of humans."

"But...I'm human." Jeff responded, as if he were ashamed.

"Not after you cross. You'll stop by here to do what you must as the rest of us do. Haunt, stalk, corrupt or kill... But when you go creepypasta..." Slenderman explained, reaching his hand out.

Jeff hesitatingly took it.

"... You don't go back."
Just a cute little short story of how Jeff came to the realm of creepypasta~

I OWN NONE OF THESE CHARACTERS.

Update-

I am very surprised this got more than 40 favorites. I've read this over and I think it's a bit out of character for Slenderman to be friendly and inviting in this way. And it's sort of a cliche ending. But I'm glad y'all like it.

Edit: Fixed some spelling errors

Commentary 8/3/12 : fkjgkdjgksjglodskf OVER 700 VIEWS AND 70 FAVS?! There is A LOT of fanfics that are WAAAY better than this that should be getting this much attention I bet. XD

Commentary 8/8/12 : WhyDoesThisContinueToGetFav'd. I will from now on make small minor tweaks to the story whenever I feel like it. And I'm writing another Slender story. I'll post the link when it's ready.
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TheREALTwilightSpark Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:3 again: talking slendy is my favorite kind of slendy.

I wonder if he gets his suits dry-cleaned? Just kinda random...
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ShuSakamakiTheLoner Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Professional General Artist
Exactly the way I imagined it
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ShuSakamakiTheLoner Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Professional General Artist
It's beautiful :)
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sarahdaniellem Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Student General Artist
woah! this is amazing!
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TheIntenseOneCassie Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome!! This was written on my birthday XD
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sonadowfannnnnn Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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Vaasismyidol Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
I just love it **
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blueberry9602 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awesomw
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XxMelissa-StarxX Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
MORE MORE MORE THIS IS COOL c:
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LaceyCrystallin Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it
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Catwings-WingedCat Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
Ooh! 8D This is so cool!
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slendylover5556 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Student General Artist
wooooooooooo!!!!!  i always wanted to know how they met up, and now i do!

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lemur97 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Well, this isn't canon. It's fanfiction.
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slendylover5556 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student General Artist
yeah, i guess.  i just really wanted to know.
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CiciRainbowz Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it~
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lemur97 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Awww, thanks!
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d3adcat121 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
dude just make part 2 if you can also i don't know who to see in the story. maybe add ben to the story how they became friends just do the best you can that is all I got to say.
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d3adcat121 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
were is part 2?
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lemur97 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
lemur97.deviantart.com/art/Jef… You may consider this a part 2
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d3adcat121 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
yes the story was good pls make moar :)
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:iconlemur97:
lemur97 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
What would you like to see in a story?
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:icond3adcat121:
d3adcat121 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
that will be alright thx
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:iconlemur97:
lemur97 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
What will? :?
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sneekywolf3500 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Student Artist
make a chapter 2 please!?!?!?
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:iconlemur97:
lemur97 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm not sure... You can check out another story I made about them! This is just 1 of 2 I ever wrote.
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ProxyModel Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i have one question...why the random spanish line?
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lemur97 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm not sure what I was thinking back then when I wrote this Little story... I think it might have something to do with the actual video for Jeff the killer. I can't remember.
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ProxyModel Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I remember someone telling me the origional video was in spanish but its actually in english by sessur on youtube.
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lemur97 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Oooohh, cool!
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1ady Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
Wow dang dude this is very good it could make so much sense of everything lol thank you.
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XJenniferTheKillerX Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
OMG I'M GOING TO SAY THAT NOW!!! XD

"Once you go creepypasta, you don't go back" LOL
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AgentMaryland93 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
hm, I wonder what would happen if one were to create this in a darker tone? if you don't mind, I think I'm gonna write it.
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:iconlemur97:
lemur97 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Sure, go ahead.
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AgentMaryland93 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
I'll be sure to credit you for the idea :iconrainbowsqueeplz:
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:iconlemur97:
lemur97 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:glomp: :la: :squee: Thanks so much!
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AgentMaryland93 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
it won't let me post it. it keeps giving me error code 500 or telling me there was no response from deviantart. wtf?
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:iconlemur97:
lemur97 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Never had that problem before! Try to google it.
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AgentMaryland93 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
apparently, Deviantart is having a few malfunctions. as a 500 error is something only the site admin can correct
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lemur97 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I'd give it a little bit.
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Iknowwhatyoudrew Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Best ending ever!! :D
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ElizabethAuditore Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student
Awesome. I love it.
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bonluvdrowned Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My life is torture oh I lovvvvvvve it
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lexiejay Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
"who would except him..." it's "who would ACCEPT him..." other than that, stellar fic.
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lemur97 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Ah, thank you VERY much!
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lexiejay Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
I've been thinking of writing some slenderfics, got any tips?
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lemur97 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
The way I portray him, he's a being of class and advanced vocabulary. Aside from dialog, ways to describe him in the story can be as if you were describing a horrific event or sight. Give intimidating details for an intimidating mental image. If you want to give him some more physically noticeable emotion, you can say "his face was sunken in slightly, the shadows of his face gave him a look of *insert emotion here*. But I'd use that for if he were angry. I also like to think his face slowly rips open to form a "mouth" and makes gruesome, skin crawling sounds as it does.

And one more thing about tentacles, I've always wondered if things would be more scary if they were actually branches. Black, cold, constricting branches.

But that's if you want to portray him in a scary way.
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lexiejay Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
Thanks a ton I'm totally gonna use that ^.^. Happy trails!
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jeffthekillerlove Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
Awww cute
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iaM-ZiM Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
:heart:
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RavenNeverm0re Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Student General Artist
I need to see that place that Slender mentioned... I would fit in perfectly...
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